My essay

by pthomson025

I had a little trouble writing my essay. I had many ideas in my first draft but there wasn’t a clear idea. I had decided to go in a new direction on my other draft. I used some of my first draft but I picked one thing to write about, and how it had an affect on my life. I feel like with my final draft it has a main theme and idea, I was able to prove and overall point. Tell a story. It felt good to get my first college essay over with.