I thought that this essay was harder than the first one because we had to dig for information and relate it to the readings. The first paper was easy because it was a personal essay. I was able to make connections in my second essay but I found it more difficult too then in the first essay. I compared Graff, and Wolffs pieces and then tried to put my own opinion on them. I tried to connect all three. I think some strengths in my draft is when I talked about my brothers and related them too the two authors. There were definitely some differences from my first essay and this one. I used quotes and had to look for information to write about.